Bit boring
I think the bass is a bit too distorted and the drums are a bit droopy, but it's a good effort overall. I think it'd be used most in city-scenes on Flash, You know, like A huge city with crime n'stuff, and you're like wondering around it.
What did you make it in? Fruity Loops? If so, then I cannot give you any REAL help or tips or overall ratings becaus eI really don't know how to use it.
Like it though :).